A Bat-Winged Girl

A Bat-Winged Girl

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A Bat-Winged Girl



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Title: A Bat-Winged Girl
Pixel Artist: Stratus-Stereo  (Level 2 Hired Gun :: 958 points)
Posted: 2/2/2010 21:17
Palette: 3 colors
Statistics:  13 comments    5 faves    0 avatars

For the black and white challenge. Also my first entry for a challenge.

 


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Sonnenstein (Level 4 Ensign) @ 1/26/2015 06:53

I like this noir) And like this character too


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meiji1990 (Level 1 Gangster) @ 4/11/2010 21:08

Nice style...but somehow the sword animation look werid..@@


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Manupix (Level 11 Godfather) @ 2/6/2010 12:18

This has seriously improved! Congrats! :)

If you feel like giving it a little more time and it's a rainy sunday, I'd suggest to make a second, slightly different pose for the end of the move and alternate the two a few times, the way it is now is really frozen.

And please edit that description!


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KingOfTheTrolls (Level 9 Boss) @ 2/4/2010 22:11

looks alot better


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Stratus-Stereo (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 2/4/2010 20:59

I'm-a gonna call this kind of done. Worked on it for 4 hours or so making changes. I might come back and smooth things out, but I'm exhausted. D:


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KingOfTheTrolls (Level 9 Boss) @ 2/4/2010 18:39

Looks great but... feels unfinished.


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Manupix (Level 11 Godfather) @ 2/4/2010 04:01

Much better, I like the face.

You could still improve some stuff if you want.

Mostly, the wings could be made more obvious, different from the ... cloth? tail? feathers? I'd make them mostly white, more readable, and move smoother.

The cloth or whatever should fall away from the wings, move more smoothly too, maybe only in the lowest parts.

Legs are possibly the biggest problem: they're sticks. I'd suggest not to make them move (to make it easier), keep them at the closest position (even closer?) and try to suggest a leg shape in at least one (left, ours). Feet are ok, except the left could use 2 more pixels under the tip.

Umbrella / saber should be held upwards. I like the 'poof' thing, maybe the clouds don't need an all-around outline.


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Metaru (Level 8 Brigadier General) @ 2/3/2010 22:31

thats preview promised way too much :C


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Delicious (Level 9 Boss) @ 2/3/2010 21:58

For a pixeled character, she is fairly attractive. :P

Good work on your entry.


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slym (Level 8 Rear Admiral) @ 2/3/2010 21:54

This actually gave me the illusion of AA! I love it :D Definitely has my vote :) 


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Stratus-Stereo (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 2/3/2010 18:41

Made the suggested changes. Looks much better now.


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Manupix (Level 11 Godfather) @ 2/3/2010 04:13

The eye-looking feature on the shirt is disturbing, looks like the actual sprite's eye, until you find the girl's head. Girl could use an eye.


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Lizard (Level 5 Sniper) @ 2/3/2010 02:12

make the background another color, a solid one, then go to iaza.com and make it transparent.


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