well guess thats wht missing, ill have to practice more on drawing faces D:. thx for pointing out wht i miss  xD( totally forget about the cheeks ._.)

What do you mean? There's a lot you could do with the chin. Just puff out the cheeks. That's your problem, really. You just went straight from the ears down to the chin, with total disregard to the cheeks or jaw bones.

thx for the comment , i totally fogot about them blending together too much, well i change it but dont think i can do much for the chin, did what i could.

The chin seems a bit triangular, make it a bit more round c:

The dressand shirt/blouse blend in a bit too much, make the pink a bit more prominent maybe. :>