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124?, didn't you read the description? I said that the sprite uses 67 bg and all (palette has 124 colors in case someone d/ls it and views the palette).
To make it something like 16 colors is a bit tricky since the mexican flags has 3 colors, red/white/green plus brown on the eagle (total of 4), and I recicle colors, red, green and white on the flag, use the same brown for the pole.
here 18 colors: http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3425/escoltax2x3x2.png , you can't ask for more less =)
I agree that is wayyy too many. I can only see about 3 for hair, 3 for white, 3 for green, and 4 for skin tone.
124 colors? D: Lay off on the colors! 16 would be good for the piece.
Actually this one is very good, but you may need to add outline to flag or make white on it brighter - separate it somehow from the background (building) which uses relatively the same color.
Also some lines on the ground would make for better feel of perspective - I mean boundaies of track or something.
That edit you made is much nicer. Give it a background with the same kind of improvement!
Bg composition and shading might improve too. The window-like thing on the wall just in front of the girl is distracting. The even ground dithering doesn't give any feeling of depth as a more patchy texture and shading would.