I like the style.
nice concept, but this defenatly could be cleaned up. You have till sunday, besides. I suggest cleanign up lines especially the lights and bg. also it would be nice if you add some yellow shine on whatever the clear sruface is. this has potential i think :)
Nice style and point of view, but as Jeremy said, it could do with some AA, right now it looks a bit color reduced.
Rather nice, but could use some refining.
Nice crisp rendering. I agree it could be a bit more refined, and perhaps AAed (The lighter pink could be used on the face, for example)
Picture itself is really good, but there are a lot of places that seem to be needing some cleaning up. It kinda seems like a freehand drawn sketch.