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Ouch! Great job for a 2nd piece! and congrats for challenging yourself!
Very good color use.
Main problem: I think you tried to make a foreshortened arm, extending towards the viewer, but it doesn't work, looks like a very short and thick arm sideways. Culprits: mostly the sleeve opening shape (should be round); position of hand (impossible with extended arm); and generally perspective and shading. Look at yourself in the mirror with that position.
Also, the forehead is very low (eyes tend to be in the middle of the face); and neck should be mostly in shadow.
Ya, I really do need to practice my anatomy (especially the face). Which part of the body did you have in mind?
thx for the comment
looks pretty ok it does give the correct ' feeling' that everyone has about dentist ._. ( yea , FEAR ) well practice more, its quite hard to make every part of a body look very nice x.x so its ok.
hehe sorry I screwed up didn't I? well its all fixed now. thx for looking out for everyone skamocore!
Why have you submitted this zoomed in? The site features a built in zoom feature; furthermore, having this image zoomed in means it is larger than the challenge restriction - "Canvas Size - Min 150 (width) x 100 (height); Max 300 (Width) x 200 (height)."
Also, this has 134 colours!
Please fix these issues and resubmit.
oh ya i did notice that about halfway into coloring. It was late so I couldn't fix it. thx for the comment it mean a lot coming from you.