this feels a bit strange, but hahaha... he looks like he is about to get a hearth attack!
bonayna. I'm going to put all my opinions here, even the ones that don't aren't really neccesary.
The cheeck bones jut out too much, and the eyeballs are way too small, there needs to be more shadow under the chin, the neck is too thick and it needs an outline, the black spot near the teeth seem a bit weird, there needs to be more folds on the sweater, and the words 'GAME OVER' should follow them, top of the hood seems too thick, the tip top of the triangle seems awkward and the canvas should be adjusted to look better, and the triangle itself should be AA'd.
But serisouly, as TINC said, this is completely badass dispite the crits I gave :)
Looks good so far, but it looks like a work-in-progress.
neck anatomy/ clavicles could use work
could make some cool folds/more realistic behaving fabric
this is badass regardless
Really nice shapes on the skull, but I think the outline between the teeth shouldn't be that dark.