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I've made little changes ,add more outline and edit the jump trails.
i dont know why, but i dont like the realistic feeling on this one. Its lacking something... cant say what it is.
Although I agree with the comments below, I kinda like this XD
The backgrounds look real good - except for that hill over there - and I like the way the 200 is flying out of the block.
You should improve this, but I think it's pretty cool as it is.
i didn't made nothing palette,i've made this with the colors if i think in that moment.
83 colors is a problem? for the speed lines,yes,it's a bit weird but hey,use the fantasy XD
for the rest I've tied, if don't like it , I can understand =)
Agreed with Metaru, the speed lines are wrong because he jumps diagonally, plus it breaks the simplicity
unless mario is flying with his legs extended ignoring the blocks onm its path, i don't know why those trails behind him had to be there.
not to mention, mario really, really looks as a ragdoll ruined by jpeg compresion. the preview image at first gave me the impression that infact you used a jpeg image. the colors are all messed up and the trails don't add any dinamism but rather makes him even more stiff and he ends blending with the background in some points. the whole image is also 83 colors, wich is also way too much for something that looks as simple as this.
agree with B_j0k3r0, needs black outlines to make them stand out more. blocks are a bit big too
other than that, this is a lovely remake
Nice! that would be awesome to play.