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Nice, but there's room for improvement.
The face shading relies solely on dithering, which does not provide the desired effect.
Some lines are jaggy.
Colors come in separate patches of similar hues: this might be ok in the elements around the face, but makes the face look dull. In the ref, the cheeks are a redder hue which gives both life and volume.
Excellent. I especially liked the work on the fabric. But I'm suspect to talk. Mucha's illustration is my favorite among those who represent one of my favorite characters.
Sorry for the english.