alright, thanks for the feeback. looks much better now

It looks nice.  You did a good job copying his style. I think it may differ in some subtle ways only. Maybe you could lower her eyes and spread them a bit appart to look cuter. Syosa just uses more round and dynamic shapes. If you could give your doll some swoosh as well, it would look perfect. Otherwise, excellent job. Specially the color feel looks very similar to the originals :)

cheers

You got the style of her clothing down good enough, but there's something about the face that bothers me.  I think they should be open, and her rosy cheeks don't seem to fit either.