Lookin' good. The design is nice.
Crits: Breasts are too high up her chest. Face looks too masculine, and the mouth looks a bit too high up too. The crotch is definitely too much to the right, makes it seem bulged (D:). The lower leg is a tad too short, it's making her look shorter than she should. Her upper arm is thinner than the lower arm. Adding some stronger biceps in there would help, anatomically and on the overall look of the character (being a military and all).
i think the face needs to be more feminine. Good job though.
Oh yeah, just a bit to far to the right. And that's not exactly x3 it's more like x4. not that it matters
there is a bit too much contrast between some lightings, and her breasts seem a bit off somehow.
The crotch needs a little work, it's too far to the right.
SHIT!!! I love this, its like a character from shock troopers on MAME!! <3 omfg instafavourite.