I like your first two figures a lot, simple but with a lot of character! Hair is nice. But your third one. . . the stance throws me off a little, I'm not sure what she's doing with her arms. And the checkered shirt isn't working, just kind of flattens her out.
Why does the white part on the checkered cap have shading? It's attached to the hat, so it should look more flat since it's the front. I like the way the line art just pops and shows a simple structure and then the colors show the depth, or the light in the figure. nice and i live the way the legs and some of the chest is looking so far, the face looks liek a chick's and the hair makes it seem really gay, I dont know if you actually attemped that, but yeah .....
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