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Maybe focus his eyes straight ahead instead of scanning like a radar.
@ninjacrow
>the expression on that guy is priceless!
Him am thinking very hard.
Me am too.
It's impressive!
Some of the comments mention trouble with the animation, but the only real problems I see are that the shadow line on his right arm (our left) and shoulder jumps too drastically from frame 5 to frame 6 (the sudden change in how much of the arm is bright really stands out) and his right arm (our left) moves quite a long distance for a single frame of animation between frame 9 and frame 10.
But otherwise, the fluidity is amazing, and the expression on that guy is priceless!
(now I want to see a lot more "cave-man" themed images from you 
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This one is great! THe movement is really well done. The only small problem I see is the no-aliasing in the external dark line.
Agree about messy lines, its most easily seen on the left arm.
Turning is too much, and there is a jerk in the turn and arm movement right when he starts turning back to the right. Would be perfect if those were fixed :P
The turning is a bit excessive, IMO, and the outlines could definitely use some work. The style and overall animation is pretty good, though.
the turning makes it look completely broken, becuase it is
Awesome animation and style, but I agree on the messy black outlines, they need cleaning up.
In some frames it appears as if some outlines are not 1 pixel in width which looks messy. Other then that i love it! :D
It's pretty nice, though I think he turns a bit to much and that his arm flails a little too much aswell.
What a shame you didn't get to the contest, it will deserved a price!