RTS-44 girl

RTS-44 girl

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RTS-44 girl



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Title: RTS-44 girl
Pixel Artist: Clest  (Level 2 Hired Gun :: 550 points)
Posted: 4/30/2010 09:31
Statistics:  25 comments    24 faves    0 avatars

A mecha girl based on a unit from my fictional setting.

Made for a contest some years ago and winner on the same contest.

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KnobleKnives (Level 1 Intern) @ 11/23/2012 17:38

 Looks like a mix of Eureka 7 and Gundam. It could use some anti-aliasing though. Aside from that, good job 


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JWM (Level 1 Rookie) @ 6/4/2010 12:55

I think this is very good!


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Kaiseto (Level 6 Made) @ 5/7/2010 23:08

Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about this.

On the one hand, it's good artwork. The lines are great, and the dynamic pose, coupled with the great perspective really makes me like this piece.

As a piece of pixel art, I feel that it leaves a bit to be desired though. I think it could deserve a second pass, to give a lot more detail to the rather barren areas. Where you have some flat shapes (on the flames, for example) it would look great to have some detailing and variation. Antialising would also be a boon.

I guess everyone else has already said this stuff. It's great from a jumping off point, but I'd love to see you go back and fix it up. In the mean time, I'm still pretty impressed.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 5/7/2010 11:00

The transparecencies were just because I worked on things separately, so when pasting things over other things I tried to reduce opacity to give a better feeling, don´t think it strays from pixelart though.

But yeah, was exactly thinking about the clouds last night when replying to other ppl and considering a heavy edit on this one :)

 

Thanks for the comment and crit!


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ooshmaster (Level 5 Soldier) @ 5/6/2010 20:55

 

I have a problem with the transparencies, however it does seem that the rules have been much more felxible lately, so its no biggie I guess. The other part that bugs me is the cloud texture, although I do understand that this was for a contest with a deadline. But now that it's long gone I'd work on this piece again.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 5/6/2010 20:22

May edit soon then, maybe some micro revision shall make it better.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 5/6/2010 20:15

Well it was definitive given the purpose it served (the pixel contest thingy :P) but since people seem interested in it and I agree that it has potential to be way better I will retool this piece whenever I have break from my current works, thanks!


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PanicBomber (Level 6 Manager) @ 5/6/2010 17:38

alright i understand, but i think you should upload also one with aa etc, would love to see it ^^


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Shawn (Level 9 Federal Agent) @ 5/6/2010 11:17

i like this as a drawing, but its not impressive as pixel art. :\


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Manjaman (Level 8 Cannibal) @ 5/6/2010 09:58

To me it's still a rough, an interesting rough by the way, but there is still issues you could fix. A lot of. I don't consider this piece as definitive work.

 


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Mis-BUG (Level 9 Bio Mutant) @ 5/6/2010 09:40

wow!

I'm not totally convinced by the jagged shape of some elements, but this is indeed a real nice composition with a great character in a very interesting posture...


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DanielHyaku (Level 4 Shoggoth (The Mountains of Madness)) @ 5/6/2010 09:22

 More like an actual drawing than pixel art per se, but I like it.

Maybe add in a little more micro-adjustmens (AA, textures...)

Cogratulations anyway. The canvas size is very challenging.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 5/6/2010 08:45

Thanks for the comment/rating :)


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 5/6/2010 08:44

Yep, but I was on a set date contest so I didn´t have much time to manually antialise and filters of course were not allowed :P But making colored outlines could do the trick too.

Thanks


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hingeymin (Level 4 Button Man) @ 5/6/2010 04:34

stunning


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Leath (Level 2 Kukyu) @ 5/6/2010 03:31

this is really awesome 5/5


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PanicBomber (Level 6 Manager) @ 5/6/2010 02:34

i would have antialiazed the whole piece, would look MUCH better imo.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 4/30/2010 20:42

Thanks! And yeah I will take the comment on the leg shading in mind, think it is a bit odd too :)


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rod750 (Level 1 Intern) @ 4/30/2010 19:25

Wow! I expected to see somewhat smaller, is amazing. The shading of the leg skin looks a bit odd, you could improve it.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 4/30/2010 18:50

thanks! And funny you say that since my wife and I have been playing Snatcher for sega CD lately (but this piece is actually old :P). Either way, thanks for the compliment1


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MadMage (Level 5 Lieutenant) @ 4/30/2010 18:31

This reminds me of some old Sega CD games... Only with better colours! Great work!


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 4/30/2010 18:21

Thanks for the comment and the pointers. Yep. this was kinda rushed for the contest and aside from what you comented there are other flaws, mainly in perspective and proportions, but yeah the shading is a bit weird on legs, thanks!


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Chrispy (Level 7 Sheriff) @ 4/30/2010 18:15

I love the perspective, but there are a few things bothering me on this. The flames coming from the boots look odd, I think they're shaped/shaded too unnaturally. Not like green laser flame coming from robot shoes is natural. The shading on the legs is what really bothers me. The shine is too long I think.


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Clest (Level 2 Hired Gun) @ 4/30/2010 18:00

Thanks really!


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RollerKingdom (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 4/30/2010 11:49

wow this is great :) amazing size haha nicely done


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