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first of... ur bg isnt actually transparent... u just put the default pixeljoitn color around oO.... thats no good cause ppl can choose between different skins on PJ... so with a darker theme this might look strange...
anyway... about the art... i think its pretty nice, at least on 2x or 3x view... on 1x it lacks contrast.... on small scales its important to have a lot of contrast.... maybe try some hue shifting aswell... jaw seems a bit wide and eyeholes are too round .... also, since u already have a white bg, it suggest u try to aa ur outlines. they look a bit jaggy now, with all those scattered darker pixels....
heres a bit of an edit.... increased contrast in the first step, and then cleaned up a bit
Thank you Jarlaxe.
But I think onek is right with the contrast. It's to fade again. I'll make it better next time, promise.