So, I definitely lose the creative title game. . .
It's my first challenge piece, by the way.
whoa she is sexy!
Thanks, jalonso! And thanks for the tip.
Your pixelling is improving for sure :)
Don't know that this piece needs such obvious outlines.
I like the use of a more natural grey for water rather than some generic blue that most people would opt for, however there's some proportion issues with the girl; the head and esp. the right-side arm are too big in relation to the body.
My suggestion is more contrast on the red, and more work on the clouds, but other than that, it's great!
Nice, but it has one too many colours. Please fix this and resubmit.