my longest pixel ever... 5 weeks..
thank you all guys!
i will fix the eyes.. soon as i got time.
i made it by my mind, with no references at all.
and the preview really looks awful by the way jalonso thanks by the tip... i'm a big fan of your works...
i really enjoy beeing in this community since the day I entered..
Nice job on this! I love the palette. I made a quick edit to illustrate a few suggestions:
Of course the cross-eyed issue has been mentioned. I also moved the eyes apart a pixel or two, but that's a judgement call. I reworked the nose a bit. Because of its shape and how it sticks out of the face, the nose tends to shine a bit. The shape of the end of the nose is sort of like a ball with two smaller balls on either side (the nostrils). Lastly, I brought the shading in on the cheeks to give the face more shape (another judgement call, but the effect is to imply more prominent cheekbones).
I am no expert, but just some food for thought. The lips and the hair look great, by the way. Nice job!
Gotta say, I like the preview more than the piece.
eyes ---> <--- ???
Never Imagen having such adorable user givin me comments and critics, thanks alot folks!
Amazing improvements ! Also you didn't need to dither the neck, a solid shadow would have fit the face better.
Good work and not the type of thing you normally make. That's a win. Anything can always be improved. I say move on and take what you learned to the next piece.
*The trans BG on the preview looks awful*
Main thing is that irises are too close to each other so the girl looks crosseyed. Also at this resolution they could be more detailed.
what should i fix?
If you haven't presented it yet I highly suggest you to make a post in WIP forum to fix some issues with eyes. Nice pic aside of that.