С исправлениями угловатость и подключение цветов
Ey, there's not so bad. I approve it xP
Thank you for criticism and tutorials, I will be study.
(sorry for my english, I am ukrainian man)
Your lines are messy, and sharp. I'm suprised it made it into the gallery. I would suggest working on the line art, and adding some AA. you should be able to do this without adding any colors if you don't want to. A visit to the noobtorials would be wise.
I'm sorry if i sound a bit harsh, I look for improvement in everybody.