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The "trees" look pretty flat here, Peri. The buildings and the creatures seem to have such rich, dark shadows, but then these swirling trees do not match. Consistency is key!
I do however love the design of the two legged, big mouthed angler fish type thing. Looks like it could come straight out of Oddworld. Infact, I love the design of the world with the eyes, the space and whacky buildings...but it could be done better. You should try this again and adapt/improve.
Looking pretty ill, peri! :D
Is this just me though or do those purple plants look kinda unfinished?
Well as you said it's not your best work but you were pretty creative so make sure you polish this little gem! :)
Agree fully with Manjaman. I think the eyeball-guy sprite is fine, but the fanged-one and the girl need some work.
I have to disagree with Momotaro though, I think the buildings look great the way they are, and the shading on the wall accentuates its curve.
(I just downloaded Yume Nikki thanks to the comments on this piece -I just finished Earthbound so I'm craving some pixelated weirdness.)
There's no particular light source for the buildings - the curved wall has wierd shading.
Yeah, I was going for a quick and dirty style with the hope of actually producing something for once. It's not my best work; I almost didn't post it. Appreciate the feedback, though! And yeah, if I go back to it, I'll be adding more stuff. This is just what I had.
I love this !
The ennemies sprites could use a bit more work though, and alice clearly doesn't fit in with the rest of the mockup. ALso the whole stuff looks kinda empty.
More !
Don't know why I never saw this before...its great!...fav'd