The dead corpse focuses all attention and looks quite realistic.

You could probably clean up the curves(as they say) but i like the scene.

Thanks for constructive criticism and link.

Nice, your best work so far!

I like the faces, and the simplicity.

Smoke would look better light grey or white; bg buildings don't need outlines, and the right side of bg (wall?) is too noisy and distracting.

Since you're in mafia stuff, why not try this challenge.