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Lovely characters and tree, but bg is too dark, especialy for these sunny days -it is not visible at all. Especially lamp pole which should be at least as bright as a tree on foreground because it belongs to foreground too. Also for a light not to reach ground atmosphere should be very dense - like steam or smoke or dust. So if it is clean air it should leave round spot on the ground.
Right side is empty compared to left. Planetes look like they belong to foreground as they share brightness and colors with characters and not share anything with bg.
Overall I like it but not because of shortcomings.
@A.B. Lazer: Thank you for the lengthy response and compliment; your critique is much appreciated. I scraped my brain for something to add to the right but was really stuck.
@Zadatron: Thanks; the light is pretty confusing.
I may finetune it some more, thanks for the critique.