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Animation is quite nice for a start.
But it explodes too fast - make starting pole slide out of view and let a rocket fly a little in free space. Also blackout after explosion happens too fast so it is hard to appreciate what just happened - give viewer rest for a little.
Also check real videos of fireworks - usualy they have some sparkles here and there, interesting patterns and color combinations, so they give feeling of holiday, celebration, not an air attack.
Ok, thanks. It was just supposed to be a really quick animation but I will deffinetly edit it. Thanks for the suggestions!