Yep I can see what you mean I seriously failed with the right hand but thanks for the feedback. I will definitely try harder next time!
True it shows doesn't it! I really hard time with the gun. I am not good at making guns as well. I will try to improve on it though maybe through other pieces. I have become tired of fixing the gun in so many ways xD
It was hard at first to interperet where the hand ended at the hair, and I can barely make out the gun. Need to fix up the contrast on the blue and black. Good job though, I like it.
Nice but difficult to read, possibly because of inconsistent shading. I couldn't see her right arm for a long time, and it seems to go backwards at an impossible angle anyway.
Oh, there's a gun. XD
Highlight the edges, don't outline them.