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Weekly Challenge: Time to Triptych
Thanks! That's was the main idea, I'm glad that you like it too :D
got my vote :) Love how each part looks like a different painting with a different subject but still fits the other frames
Best use of the triptych concept I've seen so far. You've mimicked wall mounted canvas prints, great idea.
Fingers and hair bother me. Looks wonderful though
Hair just seems a bit flat, if you could add highlights and shadows and stuff, that would make it look even better.
Beautiful! It will be hard to top!
Agree with Stickman and Ambient; also the fingers look crooked.
Whoa this is amazing. Well I think my piece ain't gonna get anything after seeing an entry like this already. Great work!
Thank you! That a really helfull comment and the edit you show me it's absolutely right. I will change that and update my submision soon.
Thanks again!
I think that the hand could have had better selective outlining with highlights, and the nose made flatter (Japanese characteristic). The eyelid on the left side could be made lower to show the 'flap' that Asians have (whose name escapes me). Here's an edit showing these things, with changes to the (top left only): Nose, eye, and hand (slight line-art change on forefinger to give shape to thumb knuckle). Hoping that this gives the feeling of a more Japanese heritage.
http://www.ambient-art.net/files/haiku.gif
I really like what you did, a great use of the challenge and a great submission. You can't really tell that there's a restriction.
Nice. The outline around the and inside the cloth is a little on the harsh and heavy side and could be made to look less obvious.
The overall picture is lovely.
Wow, GREAT composition! This is preemptively one of my favorite entries.
You know, I've don't realise that until i've finished all the image :P
I like how the hair in the top right panel looks like a hill with a tree, gives the idea of a bond with nature...
awesome work!