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the sheath of the sword nearly looks pillowed and the line art kind of seems jaggy on the girl's body.
othe then that this is pretty good.
pretty good overall, my only complaint is the eye. i'm pretty sure you were going to that manga/anime style, in which characters eyes are much larger, but even still this is unproportionally big.
i really like the design of the girl here. its nice. i do think you need to add detail somehow though. maybe put some shine on the sword and some highlights on the clothes and hair. good job tho.
There's not enough detail on the grass and water compared to the wood parts and the trees. It just looks too flat. Also could use some AA around some places, especially that black outline on the title.
thanks! The only thing that im not happy in this is the background, it could have a lot more detail.