This is just feedback based off of my own attempts, and is not in any way supposed to be mean :
1. The hair's a bit too thick. You shouldn't have to worry about that, as long as you make it obvious that there are strands.
2. Those eyes... They're... Staring at me... They're kind of too big.
3. Certain features on her face seam 'warped'. So much so that she looks a bit like a monkey.
4. The ear's not only too high, but seems almost cut off from the rest of the head.
You're pretty good, though. Good job! :D
thanks.I kind of knew these problems but I was bored with this piece so I didnt correct them.This is just a practice and this character has no personality.When I get good enough I will try to draw an interesting portrait of a famous person like Johann Sebastian Bach, Niccolo Paganini or Nikola Tesla :)