thats the stuff, except for that odd neon blue, desaturate it a tad I think. Really love the touchup though aside

 Looks a lot better. Great work.

its changed now.

ok i altered it even more, changed the color of the eyes and fixed the shadows. i think its better now

 much better :)

 Not bad! I'm not a huge fan of the eyes though, the color just dosen't look right.

Best entry so far

maybe it works better now :P

The thumb of his hand on the right should be in front of the left not behind it should it not because hes hunched forwards. His torso looks like its pointing left but his legs are pointing right and his shoulder are dead center, turn his torso towards the center a tad I think would do the trick. Really nice job though, one of my favorite entries so far!