always add periods to everything..............................................
You have a nice grasp of shading and colour, it'd be nice to see what you could do without so much dither too :D
I think dithering is fine as long as it is used in low-contrast circumstances like this. Good work!
I see a good improvement, keep it up and see if you can keep the dither down at a reasoneable level :)
I like it. Maybe its too dithered, but as for me it looks good...
ok.........i will in future