It feels really flat, you should add selout

SpazzerEXE that's the whole point, it ISN'T Mario which is why there is no trademark "M" on his cap and the title of this piece is "Mario?"

No, toad! Don't talk to him! it's a trap! 

lol that's why I added the "?" at the end and thank you. :D

 Where's the trademark "M" thats 'sposed to be on his cap? D:

Aside from that tiny nit pick, I think this is extremely well done.