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Weekly Challenge: BioTech
Congrats on third place! I voted for you, simply because I love the colors and clean lines.
not very creative really, no clever interweaving of the natural and technological elements, just an iphone with a stem. sorry if I sound rude, I'm not trying to insult you, I just think a lot more work could've been put into the concept.
I get you, you have a nice clean simple style, clutter will detract from it. Its a tad more readable but still looks like a plant wrapped around an iPhone. The organic matter and the iPhone need blended together better, the vine/tendril going across the screen and the separate pallets for plant and device split them up where they should be as one.
Ok added an edition now. I wanna keep it simple, dont wanna put too much stuff into it :P
I agree with Sai. The style and color choice is lovely, but the iphone itself looks balanced on the plant more than part of it, making a dark green instead of black might make it more organic, or using whites instead if you want to preserve the monochrome casing.
I think you could still make it more plant-like. Perhaps changing the black to a more nature-esque color or having flowers on the screen would be more fitting.
Nice work