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Title: Good day
Pixel Artist: erzet  (Level 1 Rookie :: 66 points)
Posted: 12/6/2010 17:03
Palette: 9 colors
Statistics:  13 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

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Noes (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/24/2010 19:15

 


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Mathias (Level 7 Junk) @ 12/14/2010 09:25

Haha, Manupix. Indeed.


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naresh (Level 1 Gangster) @ 12/14/2010 07:13

wow.....................


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RuizV (Level 1 Jukyu) @ 12/14/2010 04:38

I love it! And not just because of the woman. HAHA! The flashing lights and shadows were very well implemented. Congratulations =)


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Manupix (Level 11 Godzilla) @ 12/13/2010 13:33

Exactly what Helm says. In this kind of scene light is the character, the subject, the main design element, and the medium. No less!


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Helm (Level 5 Detective) @ 12/13/2010 11:50

it looks like she's opening the drapes to a flatscreen because the lightsource is behind her, whereas if she were opening the drapes to a sunrise or something like that, her figure would be much darker and only her contour underlined with light.


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A.B. Lazer (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 12/8/2010 02:02

Not much to say on anatomy - generally it is okay, but pose is way too static - maybe put one of the legs a bit back like she just made a step. I see an atomic explosion in that window.

Тут есть кнопка Edit It - нужно провести путь к обновленным маленькому и большому файлам.


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erzet (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/7/2010 12:24

Maybe it's because of my mistakes with drawing hands and because we see nothing in this window. I understand You and I have an idea how to make it more realistic 


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erzet (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/7/2010 12:21

Yes, now I see some problems with boob.. and hands.. I'll try to fix them. Thank You) 


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erzet (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/7/2010 12:19

Да, много косяков получилось. недоработала, поторопилась.

Спасибо за дельные комменты, постараюсь всё поправить.

А как здесь принято, исправленную работу закачать поверх предыдущей, или наоборот, чтоб смысл комментариев не терять, закачать исправленную отдельно? 


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Romson (Level 8 Cannibal) @ 12/7/2010 08:51

Руки, ноги... Главное - хвост! (С) Очень хороший рисунок, мне нравится. Про грудь товарищ дело сказал, цвет совпадает с фоном, что странно. Ноги... мне кажется они коротковаты - если девушка опустит руки, у неё кончики пальцев достанут до коленок, а должны до середины бедра. И самое последнее - если достроить подоконник (?) в том фрагменте, который прекраснозадая модель прикрыла телом, то левая и правая половины не встретятся. Так задумано?

В остальном просто отлично! Девять цветов, и какой эффект! 


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KrypToniTe (Level 5 Soldier) @ 12/7/2010 07:45

I like how you draw human anatomy. Its simple but effective. Now in this piece it think she has a bit oversized legs. Meaby cut down a bit? Oh and also, he boob looks like its transparent (You kinda can see through it because its inside ring is colored like the bg... Few adjustments and voila, another hot chick! :P


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Groogokk (Level 5 Lieutenant) @ 12/7/2010 06:46

This isn't a bad piece and maybe it's just me, but somehow it doesn't look like she's opening the curtains to a window (which I think she is supposed to), but like she's staring at some kind of non-transparent screen.


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