I like it, but it wants to be animated. They need to wave, the bird needs to gracefully hover in a pattern with its wings flapping, the palm fronds need to flap gently in the breeze, and the water needs to lap and splash at the shore. The clouds might even want to slowly glide across the frame. Santa's hat might want to wiggle as he waves, too.

The contrast is pretty bad, make the sky more blue!

Also the girls legs are awkward since the feet aren't facing each other

yeah, I know ^^' I did this wile I was waiting for a video to load XD this one is pretty simple, so I might fix it later, unfortunatly, I don't know how to make the colors better

Very cute scene. Your colors choices are the biggest weakness.