I like your desperate and creepy  characters. keep it going!

Very nice and psychedelic work :)

 I think it just needs some refining. Right now it looks more like a WIP, where you tried to set up light sources and whatnot. Pretty cool nonetheless :).

Thanks Manupix. Yeah, the eyes! Gah! I don't know how to do emotive eyes all pixelly like, perhaps you could do an edit or give me a few tips?

I totally agree with the light source, I got a tad carried away, will probably fix that but my arm is too sore right now to do it tonight XD

Interesting! You could discard a lot of the outlines.

Good shading on the face, random elsewhere: think light source! The neck and most of the torso should be in deeper shadows, only the top of shoulders should be in highlight.

The eyes don't really convey any expression. Not easy I know!