First Crack at ISO.

First Crack at ISO.

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First Crack at ISO.



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Title: First Crack at ISO.
Pixel Artist: hlx  (Level 1 Rookie :: 153 points)
Posted: 2/7/2011 07:35
Palette: 12 colors
Statistics:  6 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

Please provide me with some criticism. Much appreciated.

Going for the "100+ year old house" look.

The colors are intentional, this is a house I used to live in growing up. Google Street View '26 8th ave SW, dauphin, MB, canada'

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Ivy00 (Level 1 Rookie) @ 2/9/2011 17:57

Great job, I struggle sooo much with Iso :)


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hlx (Level 1 Rookie) @ 2/8/2011 20:42

Took your suggestions and worked quite hard on them. Thanks!


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zi-double (Level 9 Necrophiliac) @ 2/8/2011 12:08

Look at this simply tut in PixelJoint from Pblink where will be good to use so dark outlines.

http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixels/tutorials.asp?id=2253

You make some generelly mistakes.

 


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hlx (Level 1 Rookie) @ 2/7/2011 19:33

I should elaborate. This is a house i grew up in. Google Streetview "26 8th ave sw, dauphin, mb"

 

The siding is vinyl, and in that color pattern.

 

zi-double: Should I not be using black outlines? Is it just the background that makes it look ugly? Or just generally do not use them?

 

Thanks for the Criticism


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Drazelic (Level 8 Partner) @ 2/7/2011 15:05

More importantly, to get in the gallery you should probably get rid of the background.


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zi-double (Level 9 Necrophiliac) @ 2/7/2011 11:31

Lineart look at good, but black outlines aren't good. Also need to specify light source. Also colours and contrast of the walls and roofs aren't very good and need more work to understand everybody that this is wooden building.

 

Nice try want to see more...

Just suggest you to use forums and will receive maybe more crits.


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