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did anyone mention that the people look like ass - literally? the rest is beautiful!
Everything is beautiful except for the people, who don't look much like people.
I like all but the two people, who look like two rocks to me. There needs to be more of a defined shape on them, like an embrace or holding hands? it would be a shame to leave them as they are because the rest of the piece is so well done!
I see a lonely molar staring at the sunset. Great details in the sky though (i love the heart-shaped dithering).
my imagination says its a pair of pants watching a sunset. you just cant asume the viewer would read it as you do just because you believe they do.
Agreeing with Dusty and Psychotron. I like the details on the sky and such, but I could not tell if it was two blob people, aliens of a different shape smearing into each other or a tombstone with a teardrop on it. Assy McGee was also one of my assumptions, hehe. I'm not saying they need detailed. But the silhouettes do not look human or even living at all.
Really love the clouds and background, its stunning. I must agree with Dusty though, the people are my least favourite part of the piece. I can see that its people, but I'm not loving the amporphous aesthetic sorry...
I think its very easy to tell that its two people. I disagree that it needs any more definition, I'd say some things are best left to the imagination.
Just doesn't seem like it to me since there's absolutely no discernable features I can tell at all. No hair, no legs, no arms, and I can't quite make what's going on at the bottom, if they're feet(which would be proportionately way too big) or maybe maybe legs. I dunno, I just think it is very hard to read and could be improved.
Didn't realize the roof looked so bad: updated it and some other slight tweaks
The sky is really nice and it's the details that make it. It would be great if the same could somehow be applied to the ground level.
Good concept.
cute
As ska said, fix dat bandingroof. You could maybe skinny up the legs of the person on the right, and define their asses.
*Ahem* You do know this is a Valentines day challenge, right?
Hmm, what's standing in the center? It looks like Assy Mcgee(no offense!). I just can't make anything of it, though it just might be a facepalm moment where it's obvious to everyone but me.
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Everything about this is great except the massive over AAing on the right :( fix that and this will pretty much be perfect.
heart dithering hahhaha