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photobucket/tinypic/imgur.
but instead work on fixing this piece of crap rather than being worried about image hosting sites.
Ah, this comment is better :)
Well, actually, this is a cropped version of this:
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/1184/avatarlorenzotrans.gif
Which in turn, is a cropped version of this:
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/1154/characterlorenzofull.gif
(card was only added for the avatar)
the whole thing its a fest of jagged lines wich means that most if not everything is made of jagged lines. the use and abuse of black indiscriminately eats every single little detail that doesnt have enough room to display a good amount of color, leaving colors with poor contrast like the brownof the hair blending with everything else.
the current shading is non existant due both the low contrast and again basically due black eating everything around it. basically there is no shading or the one is virtually invisible or non existant, not to mentioned there is no t a single lightsource(eithe rby the poor shading or because there are multiple radial shadings going on each different element)
the readbility of the card is terrible right now. you just tried to mash as many details as you could, but didn't really cared about if they did worked on the final display.
overall, this is really bad.
You do know the hat fits the head neatly, do ya. It's all about the mid part.
Also, it'd be better if you just give some constructive information, since that could help people, instead of going around talking like ur the best. Cheers ^^
that hat's is certainly bigget than his cranium. and the whole thing is a fest of jagged lines and poorly shaded shapes.
You're an agressive fellow, aren't ya.
If u don't want me to worry about it, don't bring it up :)
But did you see the fullview piece? That might explain why this small piece is full of black lines