Memory Scene

Memory Scene

You need to be logged in to rate pixel art.

 

Pixel Art Details

Memory Scene



user
Title: Memory Scene
Pixel Artist: mikewest  (Level 1 Rookie :: 68 points)
Posted: 4/1/2011 07:08
Statistics:  6 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

Hi, so this is my first pixel.  I started working on a game with a couple friends.  These are the assets from a room in which you pass by the small pictures (which are supposed to be photos) and the larger pictures pop up (which represent memories).  There is also going to be a caption under each memory (something about a first christmas together, something about a trip to a cabin where the couple stayed in to avoid the storm, and something about a trip in which the couple bought a dog while on vacation).  The room is about reflecting on a life with your dying wife.

(The graphics are displayed at about 5x size in game)

It's our first game and I have no art training, so any feedback/criticism would be absolutely stellar and much appreciated.

Discussion

If you would like to comment you will need to be logged in. Register now. It only takes a moment and it's free.


user
|||| (Level 9 Orchid) @ 4/4/2011 18:37

I like that little house.


user
SatTheArtist (Level 1 Rookie) @ 4/4/2011 10:52

2x or 3x looks extremely better. I like the idea of it, and the shading is a start.


user
MCSuire (Level 1 Intern) @ 4/3/2011 18:16

It reminds me so much of Knytt Stories O.o


user
cure (Level 11 Pixellite) @ 4/3/2011 17:57

oh, and we usually don't want stuff submitted above 1x, but if you preferred to display this at 3x or so it'd be fine, being that the piece is so small


user
mikewest (Level 1 Rookie) @ 4/2/2011 13:32

 Thanks!  I'll experiment a bit more with posture, clouds and coloring.  Doh, I hadn't thought of posting to the forums- I'll definitely do that as well.


user
cure (Level 11 Pixellite) @ 4/1/2011 07:35

sounds like a pretty cool idea. their arms and postures are a little block in the first and second pictures, you could make them slightly more naturalistic if you wanted, but I think blocky works fine here too. The contrast between the blue of the ocean and the blue of the piers in the ocean is too small, I'd make the ocean a little lighter, or the pierblue a little less blue and more brown. Clouds are kinda goofy shaped, I know  it's not necessarily naturalistic, but I usually draw mine with flatter bottoms and billowy tops. bearded guy seems to have a short jaw, you could extend the beard down a pixel, may or may not look better. this is all just me searching for crits since you asked though, they're pretty good overall. Also, if you want more in-depth critique on further graphics for the game, you could start a thread in the WIP forum.


Related & Tags


Memory Scene avatars, Memory Scene icons, Memory Scene pixel art, Memory Scene forum avatars, Memory Scene AOL Buddy Icons

Sponsored Products

Donate

Want to give some dough back to all those amazing pixel artists? Donations provide prize money for contests, help cover hosting costs and support new initiatives.

Farm Fresh Sketch Comedy
Play party games with QuizBash app
Play party games with QuizBash app

Report Problem

If you are going to report an issue with this piece please provide relevant URLs/Images to back up your claim on PJ Discord.

Register

If you would like to be a team player why not register? It's quick and easy and you'll be able to comment on, rate and upload pixel art.

Already Registered?