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I agree with jaeden about the nose. Whilst I've never met you in person, my friend Polly has a nose almost exactly the same as the one in this picture and I really like her nose :P
COMMENT: yeah I said that
Dont change the nose, Ive met you in person, dont change it, its yourse, Yes, you have a pointy upturned nose. dunno where you get it from, your mom and sister dont have it.. your brother sorta does.. not by much but hes also a guy.
Suggestion; Bra lines.... either that or nipples.. cant tell me those shits arent there. The more I looked at the pic the more I wanted to see it.
I agree on the softening of the lines some are over softened, but considering the style of the image, it still works.
i actually wear them that way. i find it prevents my ears from hurting after long periods of use. hair hardly prevents earphones from doing their job :)
Why are the headphones worn over the hair? I might be wrong, but i think they're used for listening to things, not for keeping hair in place.
Always enjoy your artwork <3 love your style the nose is awesome =D
i made an edit of your work, i hope you don't mind:
http://i.imgur.com/zxZlJ.png
i was focussing on getting the nose looking ok, i didn't change anything else.
your main issues are overusing both anti-alias and outlines, a good example would be the eyebrows. as perihelion pointed out, highlights could really improve your work- for now, it looks like some cheap vector graphics. i'm sure your real skin is far more interesting than two dull shades of pink. don't hesitate to vary the hue and saturation between shades in your hair, plus the hair looks relatively flat (like on the same plane) because of the lightest tone.
you may also notice that i moved the pens in the hand- i tried holding them (the pens) like in the original and i couldn't manage.
keep up the good work!
Titular? I see what you did there.
I agree that the nose looks off. Also, you could use more highlights, particularly on the hair. Very nice otherwise, though!
inb4 more comments hitting on bunnystick than commenting on the pixelart.
nose/mouth area looks a little off, as delicious pointed out. looks good otherwise
seriously?
If the pixel art is faithful to reality ... you are very sexy
Good work!
Those hands and arms seem pretty masculine, I really like your clean style though.
Nicely done. Those are some large jugs! (kinda stuck out because of the preview, haha) The nose seems a bit off, but it appears as though she is smirking sideways, so I guess that was intended. Excellent job. This is a self portrait, right? Any reference?
Nice tonal colours.
The only thing that stands out to me, are that the headphones look a little floaty and it was also a while before I could make out the pupils in the eyes.
I like the pink necklace.