ok, if i get time ( which i probably wont) ill do some editing, otherwise thanks thats helpful to know 

right now both the foreground and background seem to have atmospheric perspective. making the ledge in the foreground more vibrant and less desaturated may help separate the foreground from the bg. the pose is pretty un-dramatic, mostly in the torso. the characdter is almost slumping, the spine should be bent back, the chest thrust forward triumphantly.