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try to keep a cylindrical shape. A lot of your shading areas are a little blotchy, they should be fairly consistent. Also, I would rethink some of the palette, that brown isn't very sodaesque. And you're dithering seems a little inconsistent.
Also, try extending that shine from the top all the way down and give it more of a glassy feel. I would also outline it in glass color.
Oh, and some AA would do wonders on that label.
All in all, it's not bad, there's just some things you should consider ironing out 
hmm sounds good lol ill try it and post it :3 thanks for the advide X)))