Long neck is long ;) And her (?) face does look so... hmm...... let's say she doesn't look too feminine ;)
Another thing is the scale - it's big in terms of pixel art and soooo empty - so much space and so little detail. I mean - if u don't have an idea on how to fill this space then why are you trying to make it so big? You could easily make it smaller - it would be much easier to fill it and make it more interesting. Maybe even make it a scene with some sort of background...
the alpha and omega are difficult to read against that tan. some aa on the dark red robe would help, and there's a bit of banding on the face. interesting piece though.
So great to see something new from you. Your art style is so appealing :)
It was good, but with this man's face, a little strange.