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Thanks for the great critique once again :) the foot was even smaller lol but I guess it's not big enough yet! same towards the right hand xD.. Ill add some more pixels to it!
Also I agree about the moon, especially since the moon could also be a bit smaller to seem a bit far away..
Same with the hills. and thanks for the spelling error I knew it was wrong after I submitted but that lazy feeling didn't let me correct it xD even tho all i need is to remove an "s" haha!
Im glad you bookmarked it to give some comment and critics, it's really appreciated!!!
Hey, super-creepy piece -- I like it!
Some interesting design sense...
And now here's my 2 cents:
The foot is too short, and the hand around the pencil looks a bit small. The highlights on the chest area makes the character look female.
The cloud on the left through the big window at his eye level has a curl that points toward the moon on the right, but since this doesn't seem to be a stylistic representation of the moon's rays creating annular highlights on what is otherwise a semi-solid layer of cloud, it looks instead like it was pixeled on top of a scene that already had the moon present -- and obviously the moon will have absolutely no influence on the shape of clouds in our atmosphere, and thus it looks mildly artificial.
The brown hills underneath are very smooth, and read to me as something soft, like earth or sand, and so the hill on the right looks like it leans too far to the right -- I don't know that earth or sand could hold such a shape under its own weight.
And the plural of 'rabbit slipper' is 'rabbit slippers', not 'rabbits slippers' : )
It could probably benefit from a little AA, as well, but that's pretty nitpicky.
Otherwise, I dig it, especially the formatting, such as the fonts and icon and border. Great work!
annular highlight link:
http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/2008/06/annular-highlights.html
Obrigado :) Oh design do homen foi baseado de um character me de um jogo
Havia tempo que você não postava, hehe. Adorei o lápis e o cenário, mas tem algo no design do homem que não me convenceu... achei bem legal.
almost everything in this picture perturbs me in some way
Glad it was helpful -- keep up the great work!
(p.s. I like the moon just as it is
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