If I may make a suggestion: I think the detailing is an improvement over the solid black that was there before, but perhaps a middle ground would work better. Because everything has lighting, there are no significant areas for the eye to rest, and it looks a little busy. Having a little more black could also (though it seems paradoxical) define areas, as it will separate planes hidden in shadow from planes that receive light. Here's a quick edit to illustrate what I'm talking about.
Thank you, I tried to tidy up the image a little bit again.