Unfortunately this didn’t get the vote required for the gallery. You can always start a wip thread if you want to improve and resubmit the piece. Here’s my analysis of what could be improved:
Right now I think you’re overusing black. Black is great, it can really make stuff pop when used in the right spots, but if its overused then it tends to flatten the image. The lack of shading might be another thing to look at. If you shaded one side of the house darker than the other, it’d really help to separate those two planes. The roof is odd too. Try looking at references of roofs, the usually overhang the sides of the building a little. The angle of the triangle in the roof seems a little off, I think the edge closest to us is too steep. The house itself is strange in that it’s not much larger than the attached garage (which doesn’t match the house). It’d look more natural if it were maybe twice as long, as it’s kinda tall and skinny right now. I’m also unsure of what the red thing in the road is.
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Unfortunately this didn’t get the vote required for the gallery. You can always start a wip thread if you want to improve and resubmit the piece. Here’s my analysis of what could be improved:
Right now I think you’re overusing black. Black is great, it can really make stuff pop when used in the right spots, but if its overused then it tends to flatten the image. The lack of shading might be another thing to look at. If you shaded one side of the house darker than the other, it’d really help to separate those two planes. The roof is odd too. Try looking at references of roofs, the usually overhang the sides of the building a little. The angle of the triangle in the roof seems a little off, I think the edge closest to us is too steep. The house itself is strange in that it’s not much larger than the attached garage (which doesn’t match the house). It’d look more natural if it were maybe twice as long, as it’s kinda tall and skinny right now. I’m also unsure of what the red thing in the road is.