ewww, i mean eww

ahh yes...The B.O.B. understands that he is wrong, once again....The B.O.B. is sorry for jumping to conclusions...The B.O.B. shall never speak out of terms again...The B.O.B. shall now cease speaking in the third person...

btw, I didn't mean to be offensive either. I was just trying to be a pre-mediator just in case one party took it the wrong way or the other way around...once again...sorry..and yeah, this would actually look a little better if the arms were redrawn a little more anatomically correct, and some anti-aliasing would actually give it a cool looking style...

I didn't mean to offend anyone, just kinda speaking my mind there.
But yeah, you might wanna pixel that text instead of hand draw it, it just doesn't look evil, and it  sorta makes it look like it's a joke or something, the horrow would probablt be better achieved with a much better text...

You got the shape pretty good, maybe you could post the lineart.

Also, B.O.B., being a  rookie doesn't necessarily mean that you are a beginner at pixel art. Many rookies are actually really good, and have posted masterpieces.

Whilst this is true B.O.B,  me7356 actually attempted to address the artwork in question more than you did.

I would recommend you create a W.I.P thread for this and withdraw it from submission for the time being. This way you can probably see to a couple of the issues mention by me7356.

On the plus side the animation is quite effective, and would look even better were the rest of it up to scrath. The palette is really uninspired, almost looks like most of the colours are taken from the generic MSpaint palette. Also, avoid using the spray tools- theyre the pixel artists nightmare, and not in a good 'horror' themed way.  Make sure your line art is absolutely perfect before you attempt to colour it.

Whoa there me7356, take it easy with the comment. If you can't read, mycoal17 is still a rookie. Give him a little more time to shine. He could have put a lot of hard work into the drawing you know. And even if YOU think that the drawing isn't good, your comment really wouldn't have helped the guy improve. But I'm not dick, so I won't report you. Might wanna be a little more considerate in the future though, dude...

It looks like you make the outline, but used the fill and spray tools... And the text just plain sucks...