I think it's great but the little dragon girl lets the piece down.
Nice work with only 4 colors, the girls face is fantastic
Really cute, and I definitely think you're right that this is what Japan is like.
Um, I opened up your image and started messing around with the colours a bit and I thought I'd share. wouldn't necessarily say it's an improvement or a good edit or anything http://i.imgur.com/Z56Dn.png
Hehe this is just purely cute c: