I think a more realistic wave pattern would help, the 'V' shape doesn't read as a wave.the placement of the clouds is strange and does nothing for the piece compositionally. not sure what the blue mound on the right is. the sun isn't a circle. be careful when using pure black, unless it's used consistently it tends to flatten a piece. the sails have no volume, if they're catching wind then they shouldn't be flat squares.
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I think a more realistic wave pattern would help, the 'V' shape doesn't read as a wave.the placement of the clouds is strange and does nothing for the piece compositionally. not sure what the blue mound on the right is. the sun isn't a circle. be careful when using pure black, unless it's used consistently it tends to flatten a piece. the sails have no volume, if they're catching wind then they shouldn't be flat squares.