Very nicely done! I'm very impressed, considering this is your first post. Since it is, I'm guessing you're relatively new... probably not though. Anyways, welcome to PJ.
i just saw that i didnt use the whole pallete,so heres a little fix,ill guess there will be more,cus i dont like it so far
thnx everybody
ill try working on for some more AA and fixing
look forword for updates
I knew where the palette was from the second I saw the preview; is that a bad thing? 
Quite cool, but I think it would benefit from some more AA, especially regarding the smoke.
@bobowitzbob you are right,its my first post around,but im not uploading every scribble iv'e ever done...