Looks nicer, now you should avoid the pure gray and use a blue hue. Especially if it vomes to colors you could do some HUE changes, it'd make the whole piece more pop out.

I made some adjustements. Some parts of the AA is wrong now, but you can think about it.

http://share.cherrytree.at/showfile-3802/heart_princess.png

 Yes, thank you for the tips. I tweaked it slightly, touched up the eyes and changed the pose. I really appreciate the help. :)

 Yes when I orignally uploaded this I wanted to link to a tutorial she posted on pixiv.

the eyes should be worked out, so it seems more like a dead puppet. I also underline the comments of cure and CELS.

Reminds me of Alice in Wonderland. Mabye the Hearts Princess?

I can't critize much, but I'd say job well done!

reminds me a lot of syosa's work. hair/face could use some darker colors in there to increase the contrast and define the forms.

 Yeah, she's in some weird animu pose. Almost as if she's floating in space.

I could have sworn I commented on this already. Anyway, I like it, but she looks like she's falling backwards.

Cute. ^_^