Indeed, not creepy at all. Zoom in and look at that lovely smile 
What's creepy about it? Looks like a typically normal pretty girl.
A bit more contrast overall could help.
I'd watch out for banding, there are quite a few areas that are affected.
It's an improvement on the original, let's hope the work only improves!
It's very nice though that pink color doesn't work for me at all. Perhaps if it was a little more brighter and balanced between the two flesh tones it's used to buffer
I think the highlights on the skin could be a little brighter, otherwise looks nice, huge improvement.
Welcome to PixelJoint by the way - a lovely home to stay as a pixel artist!