Mostly: 1 = the line work is very jaggy; 2 = the high contrast of eyes and teeth clashes with the low contrast of the rest.
Maybe you could stick to black lines if you're more comfortable with them at this stage, so you will better see where the problems are. Try to smooth the curves. It's really a careful, pixel by pixel work that's needed!
Then if you want to bring it further, you might study these two pieces for some hints of where to go. Keep it up! ;)
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Mmmh... there are some issues with this piece!
Mostly: 1 = the line work is very jaggy; 2 = the high contrast of eyes and teeth clashes with the low contrast of the rest.
Maybe you could stick to black lines if you're more comfortable with them at this stage, so you will better see where the problems are. Try to smooth the curves. It's really a careful, pixel by pixel work that's needed!
Then if you want to bring it further, you might study these two pieces for some hints of where to go. Keep it up! ;)